The next day, I drove to a repair shop to get a new tire. Knowing I would have some time on my hands, I brought several pieces to edit.
Here are the five senses as I sat down (and tried) to write at S & S Tire:
I smell:
tire rubber—lots of it
strong, bitter-smelling coffee at the help-yourself station
I feel:
smooth leather chairs
a cold breeze as customers entered the shop
a blast warm air from a space heater
a sports channel on the television
men chatting about business
the telephone ringing
cars rumbling down the road
zip, zip (lug nuts being tightened)
I see:
an disorderly stack of magazines
a calla lily with a cream-colored bloom
a bucket of toys
lollipops for sale
a candy dispenser machine
two other customers: one chatting a cell phone, the other going for the coffee
I taste:
cinnamon gum
(I'll have a fresh cup of coffee when I get home)
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